I’m stuck on a English question and need an explanation.

This is a writing project. I have finished the first draft, and I hope someone can help me to modify it.(I will attach the essay later)

Here are the requirements for this assignment

Writing as a Community Member + Reflection

In this project, you will contribute to a conversation about how writing, rhetoric, and/or literacy is impacted by community membership. The essay will include a thesis/claim which is then supported by textual evidence pulled from (at least) two from the following links. The essay will also be accompanied by a short reflection in which you describe what you have learned thus far that has helped you expand or shift your understanding of reading/writing. (4-5 Pages)

PROMPT: In what ways do communities (discourse communities, personal communities, or other) shape writing? Stake a claim (i.e., present a thesis) as to how writing is shaped by communities and then support it with evidence pulled from (at least) two from the readings in the following links. Your essay must be accompanied by a short reflection (at least one page but no more than three) in which you describe how engagement with the idea of communities impacts your reading and writing.

https://www.newyorker.com/books/page-turner/why-is-academic-writing-so-academic

https://www.theatlantic.com/health/archive/2016/09/brevity-in-email/501986/

https://www.theatlantic.com/entertainment/archive/2015/02/a-modern-guide-to-the-love-letter/385370/