Opportunities for improvement include:
- You have not integrated any elements of the multilevel model, and this is the core part of this assessment. Make sure you devote more time to this component.
- Reduce the amount of time/words devoted to the description of the disease. Make sure you focus your effort in the multi-level approach.
- Next time remember to include the source of images and graphs/tables.
- Try to find some consistent stats about TB in India overtime, so that we can analyse if the cases are increasing or decreasing overtime.